Now you’ve completed your draft manuscript, before you embark on a line and copy-edit you want to be sure that the big-picture elements work successfully. Is your plot plausible and compelling? Are your characters believable? Does your story drag at times and zip by too fast at others? Will your readers feel satisfied by the ending?

Developmental editing, also known as structural or substantive editing, addresses the big-picture storytelling issues such as structure, theme, audience and genre expectations, plot, characterisation, narrative distance, point of view, tension, pace and narrative shape, opening and closing chapters, timelines and settings, scene and summary, dialogue, voice and tone, language and style.

I offer three different services: a full developmental edit, an editorial report and a mini editorial report. The right choice for you depends on what stage you’re at as a writer, how confident you feel about your manuscript and, of course, your budget.

Before I commence work on any of these services, I’ll send you a questionnaire which will provide you with the opportunity to tell me about your writing background, what your intentions are and any particular concerns you may have, enabling me to best focus my feedback. At this stage, I’m aware that the manuscript is a work in progress, so while you might be nervous about sharing it with an editor, please don’t worry that it isn’t perfect – that’s why you’re considering developmental help.

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Full developmental edit

A full developmental edit is likely to benefit newer writers who are struggling to put writing theory into practice or writers working on a particularly difficult manuscript. Perhaps you’ve written yourself into a corner and you can’t see how to fix it. Or you’ve reached a point where you can no longer tell if the various elements of your story are working. A developmental edit can help you to deconstruct and rebuild your novel.

As well as writing an in-depth editorial report summarising how the manuscript can be improved, I’ll also make notes and comments throughout the manuscript and highlight specific instances of where storytelling technique can be strengthened.

The first round of a full developmental edit involves at least three passes of the manuscript and will take around six weeks to complete.

What’s included

  • a detailed editorial report of 12–18 pages
  • constructive suggestions on how to improve various elements of your novel
  • detailed comments and specific suggestions throughout the manuscript (using Word Track Changes)
  • a second round* of developmental editing of the manuscript following your revisions
  • recommended resources such as articles, books or website links tailored to your individual needs
  • up to sixty minutes** of follow-up discussion (after which an hourly rate of 35€ applies)

* Additional rounds will require a further fee to be negotiated. ** Within thirty days.

Editorial report

If you’re not sure that you need a full developmental edit, or your budget won’t stretch to it, then an editorial report – also known as a manuscript critique – is a more economical way of getting constructive feedback on your novel before you embark on further editing. I’ll write you an unbiased and honest assessment of your manuscript which will offer constructive feedback on your book’s strengths and weaknesses, and provide some suggestions for development and improvement. I’ll also address any specific concerns you may have.

A full editorial report involves two passes of the manuscript and generally takes around three weeks to complete.

What’s included

  • a detailed report of 12–18 pages
  • constructive suggestions on how to improve various storytelling elements of your novel
  • recommended resources such as articles, books or website links tailored to your individual needs
  • up to sixty minutes* of follow-up discussion (after which an hourly rate of 35€ applies)

If you decide that you would like to upgrade to a full developmental edit, the cost of the report will be deducted from the overall fee.

*Within thirty days of receipt of the report.

Mini report

If you think you’re nearly ready for a line and copy-edit but you’re still not sure that all the elements of your story are working correctly, then a mini report could help. It’s less comprehensive than a full editorial report but more economical, and useful if you need some brief guidelines as to what areas to focus on in story edits, or if you’re not sure if the idea is working.

A mini report involves one pass of the manuscript and will usually take a week to ten days to complete.

What’s included

  • a report of 6–10 pages
  • an overview of the strengths and weaknesses of your manuscript with the focus on any problem areas and possible solutions
  • recommended resources such as articles, books or website links tailored to your individual needs

If you decide that you would like to upgrade to a full editorial report or developmental edit, the cost of the report will be deducted from the overall fee.

Prices

Developmental editing prices start at 20€* per 1,000 words depending on length, complexity and turnaround time.

An editorial report costs 399€* for a manuscript of up to 60,000 words, 499€* for 60–90,000 words and 599€* for 90–120,000 words.

A mini report costs 249€* for a manuscript of up to 60,000 words, 299€* for 60–90,000 words and 349€* for 90–120,000 words.

Additional consultancy will be charged at an hourly rate of 35€*.

A deposit of 50% is required upon booking and the balance is due on completion, unless otherwise agreed.

* All fees are in euros and exclude IVA (Spanish VAT) at 21%. I’m a Spanish resident and registered as autónomo. Payment is accepted via debit or credit card, or bank transfer (via your bank or TransferWise, CurrencyFair etc) to my Spanish bank account.